Analysis of THE CREATOR
Rebecca Nabuse 1994 (Kamuli)
Come, let's reason together-
Tell me a tale, and a tale tell you I'll
Of a bloke who helped to gather-
And that he created, he helped to kill.
On the river bank they met-
afraid of her parent's wrath and the society's piercing eye,
to him she heed for a heal.
He, the last dough for the village meal-
the sole piece of his mother's wrap;
the last skin on the drum
at his academic climax, such news struck him damn
agape.
It was a psaltery ballad
complacent to his success.
And so-to him, such fate was sent!
Onto her neck, he clung bold
while his head was down bent.
with buzzing and dizziness-
cold she was left
with that inner flesh that saw no cloud!
Scheme | ABACDEFFGHIJKLMNMOPQ |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (40%) Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 1110010 1101001111 10111110 0110101111 1010111 0110101000100101 1111101 101110101 01111101 011101 11010111111 01 110110 0101101 01111111 1001111 111111 1100100 1111 111011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 653 |
Words | 135 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 500 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 127 |
About this poem
This poem has been used to teach learners but never published before for it is an original composition. I wrote it in commemoration of those girls I grew up with in the village for the fate they befell at the hands of the educated lugubrious village boys.
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Written on November 17, 2022
Submitted by Malcom on November 17, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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