Analysis of Eyes with heart

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



With me...
With me...
With me...
I know that its not easy
That you've felt this way before
I know that its not worth it
And you're mind is on the door
I know that its not working
That we're arguing some more
I know that it's not healthy
And you're tired from this war
With me...
With me...
With me...
I know the snows stopped falling
That it's settled now too long
I know new angels are calling
And the beauty of their song
I know that life is stalling
That it always seems so wrong
I know your eyes are balling
And your heart is moving on
With me...
With me...
With me...
I know the new horizon
Is brighter than before
I know you're eyes are hungry
For a certain kind of shore
I know that when you hold me
The feeling's there no more
I know you think its over
That the end is now for sure
With me...
With me...
With me...


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Poetic Form
Metre 11 11 11 1111110 1111101 1111111 0111101 1111110 1110011 1111110 0110111 11 11 11 1101110 1110111 11110110 0010111 1111110 111111 1111110 0111101 11 11 11 1101010 110101 1111110 1010111 1111111 01111 1111110 1011111 11 11 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 823
Words 179
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 612
Words per stanza (avg) 167
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Written on November 20, 2022

Submitted by heathert.34240 on November 20, 2022

Modified by heathert.34240 on November 20, 2022

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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