Analysis of Are you My SunShine



You are my Sunshine
My only, Hold up wait
What if you not trying to give me sunlight
But only Darkness
What if under all that soft pretty skin
it’s hardness
From being hurt and misunderstood and mistreated
Who hurt you!
It doesn’t matter because I’m here to Love you!
Let me apologize for everything that they have done
Let me take on that fight and frustration with you
The Sun Not going to Shine everyday
Rather it’s Darkness or SunShine
We must still Thank God for another Day
And I ask why would you take that Sunshine away
if you don’t then what Stars will they be to glaze
What Moon will it be to howl
What night will it be to lay
Everything might not be as sweet as it seem
So please come take this Sunshine Away
Let me see the you in the Dark
The you under pressure
Let me see that Angel without the wings
I mean No feathers
Stare to long at that sunlight
Tell me if your eyesight get any better
You are my Darkness
My lovely Darkness
Please don’t take my Darkness away


Scheme ABCDEDFGGHGIAIIJKILIMNOPCNDDI
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 110111 1111101111 11010 1110111101 110 110100010010 111 11100111111 110101101111 111111001011 0111011101 1011011 1111110101 01111111101 11111111111 1111111 1111111 1011111111 11111101 11101001 011010 1111100101 11110 111111 1111111010 11110 11010 11111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 993
Words 197
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 778
Words per stanza (avg) 191

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The reverse of YOU ARE MY SUNSHINE

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Written on November 16, 2022

Submitted by JermaineMahone on November 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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