Analysis of My Heaven

Michael C McAdoo 1974 (Phoenix Az)



How high I am how high I'll be
if I don't stop smoking this funny weed

I Just roll it up and take a toke
Lose all my worries in the sweet smoke

I Take some wax and hit a dab
To relax my thoughts and make me glad

Rip the bong or light the pipe
A great way to enjoy all of this life

So when I die just bury me
Then light one up and you'll see

No matter where they might send me

I'll be in heaven with my good, good weed

Michael C McAdoo


Scheme AB CC XX XX AA A B X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1111101101 111110101 111100011 11110101 101110111 1011101 0111011111 11111101 1111011 11011111 1101011111 10110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 442
Words 105
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 12

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Written on November 20, 2020

Submitted by Mikeadoo1974 on December 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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