Analysis of Dead Head



I had a thought in my head
Where it went it is not said.
It did not hurt so it wan't at work.
I heard Ed say it must be dead.

It must me dead
Oh I do dread!
I do dread
The fear of it dead.

What am I to do
Without two showes?
What am I to do
I ask of you?

Oh help me please
I'm on my knees!
Oh help me please
I can not see!

I can not see
The thought I had
Help me Dad,
It's making me mad!

There was a knock
I opened the latch
And found my thought
In my sock.

Even though Ed had said
It was dead.
It wasn't dead
Just in bed!


Scheme aaxa aaaa BcBb CcCC Cddd exxe aaaa
Poetic Form Quatrain  (43%)
Metre 1101011 1111111 1111111111 11111111 1111 1111 111 01111 11111 0111 11111 1111 1111 1111 1111 1111 1111 0111 111 11011 1101 11001 0111 011 101111 111 1101 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 531
Words 146
Sentences 13
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Written on March 15, 1999

Submitted by mike.welborn on December 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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