Analysis of UNTILED

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



Here I lay inside this hospital bed my head spinning with all these questions that the doctors could not even answer. can this be my final curtain call being that death and  I have been playing this game of cat and mouse and the son of a bitch has not caught me yet?

I finally have everything in my life that  I prayed for and it seems as if it is going to be all taken away. how the hell do I keep cheating death, holding on to dear life my last breath?

Was I a cat in another world because it feels as if I have nine lives only a humble man is wise and no longer sunken in are my eyes.

My angels must be guarding me again


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Metre 1110111011110111101010111010111110101101101111011110100110111111 110011001111110111111101111001101111101101111111 1101001010111111111100101110110100111 1101110101
Characters 627
Words 136
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 122
Words per line (avg) 33
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 33

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ANOTHER HEALTH SCARE

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Submitted by Oakley on January 03, 2023

Modified by Oakley on January 15, 2023

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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