Analysis of RUTHLESS CHURCH



Is it fair to fear severe fare for a misdeed ever so slight?
Being a mere mite before the might of he who would smite
Supposed creator it is said that sees all, knows all and permits all
Praised for all that is good yet for the bad apparently unaccountable

For all I know this exaggerated myth may have been created by a Bob or a Godfrey
Regardless of who conjured this tale to attract people to buy bull, I'll remain God free
Won't see I con a class considered as the uninitiated educated through means intentionally exoteric
Hence the indoctrinated seek beliefs under ever needing repair domed roofs balanced on bricks

Pure madness believing in mortar an immortal has chosen such a place to reside   
If it were so you'd think he'd ply a miracle having the roofs permanently tiled
Then again maybe there is a higher purpose overlooked why these buildings leak
A simple explanation is that it may be a direct access to the Heaven many seek

Heaven's demonic spawn form a Hell where a Devil deposed sits
Hell's angelic spawn from a Heaven where a despotic God deposits
Here I go again as per usual I digress on certain issues because they jar me
They unbottle personal views I can't contain making me unapologetically sarky


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111101110111011 10011010111111 01010111111110011 111111110101000100 11111010011110101011010 0101110111011011110111 11110101010010010011010001 10010010110101001111011 1100100101010110101101 110111110100100110001 1011011010101011101 0100101111100111010101 1001011011010011 11011010100101010 11101111001011101001111 111001110110111
Characters 1,226
Words 224
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 62
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 248
Words per stanza (avg) 55
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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