Analysis of Once I'm a Goner

Jeffrey Powell 1979 (Pittsburgh, PA)



Once i'm a goner
i can ponder
no longer;
Or is that just a trendy ideal?

Maybe it's pointless
to try to enjoy this
perpending the choices;
Though troves it can reveal.

It is quite hectic
to keep it protected
should You elect it;
As expiring is real.

With fetters shaken
You can awaken
with no thought taken
and live for what You can feel.

So don't waste what
You've gotten a taste of
lest it get erased plumb
-for that's not included with the meal.


Scheme AAAB XXXB XXXB CCCB XXXB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11010 1110 110 111101001 10110 111011 1010 111101 11110 111010 11011 101011 11010 11010 11110 0111111 1111 110011 111011 111010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 452
Words 97
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

Reaching one's potential -or surpassing it- is possible despite our lives having a time limit. All the more reason to live in the now. I think the things in life we discover–such as our preferences, proclivities, interests, etc. should be valued while we're here (as 'troves they can reveal' about ourselves) and are what can make life meaningful.

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Written on October 06, 2018

Submitted by JokerGem on December 03, 2022

Modified by JokerGem on January 08, 2023

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Jeffrey Powell

A bit of an introvert, Jeffrey enjoys arranging words and dabbling in poetic forms as an outlet for expressing his thoughts, feelings, and observations. He tends to play by his own rules and darts in and out of the civilized world, as avoiding the conventional gathering is more his style. Jeffrey lives with his fraternal twin whom he enjoys sharing a laugh with at the opportune time. more…

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