Analysis of EGOTISM

Kaci Tami 1960 (Vatukoula)



Sometimes I just want to scream
So that I can return my life
To when life was uncomplicated
When it was just you and me and the kids
not the other woman
Nor the myriads of events that have
come between us and our marital woes unfold
Those things that have come in between us
indecisions
indecisiveness
delusions
instilled with the fabrications that is our marriage
I want out of them
But I need courage, I need the will
Because it has to begin with me,
The Id
The Ego
The self
All crying out to be heard
Will somebody listen?


Scheme ABCDEFGHDHIJKLMCNOPE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 0111111 11110111 11110100 1111101001 101010 10110111 1011010100101 111110011 1 01000 010 0110010111010 11111 111101101 011110111 01 010 01 1101111 11010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 526
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 422
Words per stanza (avg) 101

About this poem

Again this is one of the poems written about over 30 years ago when I was going through the throes of a marriage breakup but keeping up appearances inspite of the problems I was going through.

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Written on August 20, 1999

Submitted by taminator2016 on January 16, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kaci Tami

I am an aspiring writer, poet, teller of tales that is me. I have always seen things in a different light and from my perspective, it gives you an insight into what makes me tick as a human being. My life is always hectic and the most important thing I have learnt is that there are three things that one should value in life (a) Your loved ones (b)Your health (c) The memories you create with people. In the end, we all leave this world alone, so spend time creating memories and meaningful relationships with individuals and society at large. My poems reflect my perspective on the world at large both real and imagined. I am in the process of collating an anthology of poems so I can share my likes, dislikes and life with others. Thank you for reading my poems more…

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