Analysis of True Fasting



Why have we fasted and see not,
Why have we humbled not knowing;
Taking no knowledge that we sought,
The day of your fast not showing.

On the day of your fast, you seek,
Oppressing workers for pleasure;
You only fast to fight the meek,
While lusting for more treasure.

Fasting like yours upon this day,
Will never let your voice be heard;
Since you do not trust and obey,
Obedient unto His Word.

Is there such a fast that I choose,
A day for one to be humble;
Bowing down to face the issues,
While praying not to stumble.

Is it acceptable to God,
A day for afflicting the soul;
Confessing whence you have been flawed,
Allowing the Lord to control.

Loosen the bonds of wickedness,
Undo the burden of your yoke;
The feeling of His blessedness,
Freeing yourself of any woke.

It is better to share your bread,
With the homeless who are starving;
Nourishment that they are fed,
Comforting them in their grieving.

Then your light shall break like the dawn,
Your healing springs up speedily;
Animosity will be gone.
Avoiding feeling greedily.

Then when you call, God will answer,
And you hear Him say “Here am I.”
Like a deer, you are a prancer,
And shouting out a joyful cry.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme XAXA BCBC DEDE FGFG XHXH IJIJ KAKA LMLM CNCN C
Poetic Form
Metre 11110011 11110110 10110111 01111110 10111111 01010110 11011101 1101110 10110111 11011111 11111001 01001011 11101111 01111110 10111010 1101110 11010011 01101001 01011111 01001101 10011100 01010111 01011100 10011101 11101111 10101110 1001111 10010110 11111101 11011100 0100111 01010100 11111110 01111111 10111010 01010101 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,222
Words 264
Sentences 12
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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True and False Fasting Isaiah 58:3-9

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Written on February 04, 2023

Submitted by sir_ricky on February 03, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:19 min read
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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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