Analysis of True Fasting
Richard Newton Sherrer 1951 (Easton)
Why have we fasted and see not,
Why have we humbled not knowing;
Taking no knowledge that we sought,
The day of your fast not showing.
On the day of your fast, you seek,
Oppressing workers for pleasure;
You only fast to fight the meek,
While lusting for more treasure.
Fasting like yours upon this day,
Will never let your voice be heard;
Since you do not trust and obey,
Obedient unto His Word.
Is there such a fast that I choose,
A day for one to be humble;
Bowing down to face the issues,
While praying not to stumble.
Is it acceptable to God,
A day for afflicting the soul;
Confessing whence you have been flawed,
Allowing the Lord to control.
Loosen the bonds of wickedness,
Undo the burden of your yoke;
The feeling of His blessedness,
Freeing yourself of any woke.
It is better to share your bread,
With the homeless who are starving;
Nourishment that they are fed,
Comforting them in their grieving.
Then your light shall break like the dawn,
Your healing springs up speedily;
Animosity will be gone.
Avoiding feeling greedily.
Then when you call, God will answer,
And you hear Him say “Here am I.”
Like a deer, you are a prancer,
And shouting out a joyful cry.
Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer
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Metre | 11110011 11110110 10110111 01111110 10111111 01010110 11011101 1101110 10110111 11011111 11111001 01001011 11101111 01111110 10111010 1101110 11010011 01101001 01011111 01001101 10011100 01010111 01011100 10011101 11101111 10101110 1001111 10010110 11111101 11011100 0100111 01010100 11111110 01111111 10111010 01010101 10101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,222 |
Words | 264 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 95 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
About this poem
True and False Fasting Isaiah 58:3-9
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Written on February 04, 2023
Submitted by sir_ricky on February 03, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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