Analysis of DARK, WHEN AM I GOING TO SEE HER?



I am lost in the eternal darkness, with no family, no friends, nothing …, just darkness and me.
 All I can hear is dark, all I can see is dark, all I can speak is dark, and the only one who listens to me is darkness and its dark
The dark is my loneliness, my greatest fear, my sins, my demon, my cruelty, my dreams, my darkness is it me and only me?
The entire burden I have given to this world is full of darkness, the dark and its darkness manifest me to my death.
How my I? What am I? Why am… I the one?
And a question still arises to me till my grave
Am I going to see her?


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Characters 585
Words 129
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 62
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 431
Words per stanza (avg) 123

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ahh... I have written this poem taking inspiration from my dark and depressing self. I hope you like this amateur newbie's poetry. THANK YOU

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Written on January 05, 2023

Submitted by jatinsharma150606 on January 05, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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JATIN SHARMA

Oi... Myself Jatin, I am 16 and an amateur newbie poet boy who lives in India's small city more…

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