Analysis of Fairytale Dreams

Julia Sierra 1983 (Galveston)



Seven years ago today if you would ask me where I would be?
Definitely wouldn’t say, living the life I dreamed.

A broken heart and shattered mind is what your eyes would see.
Even the scars that are visible told a part of my story for me.

Everyone goes through hard times so I would never say poor me, BUT that damage soul of mine was determined to be set free.

Our first kiss was so Perfectly done just like a movie scene.
Push me up against the wall and just gave it to me.

I was speechless to say at the least like, oh, shit, damn.
Trying to figure out what the hell was that? Was this just a dream?

You looked right into my eyes, smiled and said “now that is out the way.”
Like you didn’t just take my breath away.

I tried hard as hell to push you away. To keep those walls up and never let you see that part of me.

You refused to be a victim to my stubbornness and called me out on my feelings. You knew the look I gave you and knew exactly when I caved in.

Love isn’t perfect, so i would never say we are living a fairytale. But our connection is so strong, that our love will always prevail.

So here I am now, laying next to the man of my dreams. Thinking how perfect my life is with you on my team.

I could never explain in detail what you mean to me, for the love I have for you is as deep as an endless sea.

So here I am now, giving you all that you set free. My soul, my heart, my love and forever ME!


Scheme AX AA A XA XB CC A X X B A A
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101111111111 100011100111 01010101111111 100111100101111011 10111111110111111011110101111 1011111001110101 1110101011111 1110111011111 1011011011111101 1110111101111101 111111101 1111111101111110101111111 1011101011100011111101101111010101110 1101111101111001011001011111011101 111111011011111010111111111 11100100111111101111111111101 111111011111111111100101
Characters 1,444
Words 319
Sentences 24
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 64
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Written on January 29, 2023

Submitted by Jewlesbabe16 on January 30, 2023

Modified on April 10, 2023

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