Analysis of Fairytale Dreams
Julia Sierra 1983 (Galveston)
Seven years ago today if you would ask me where I would be?
Definitely wouldn’t say, living the life I dreamed.
A broken heart and shattered mind is what your eyes would see.
Even the scars that are visible told a part of my story for me.
Everyone goes through hard times so I would never say poor me, BUT that damage soul of mine was determined to be set free.
Our first kiss was so Perfectly done just like a movie scene.
Push me up against the wall and just gave it to me.
I was speechless to say at the least like, oh, shit, damn.
Trying to figure out what the hell was that? Was this just a dream?
You looked right into my eyes, smiled and said “now that is out the way.”
Like you didn’t just take my breath away.
I tried hard as hell to push you away. To keep those walls up and never let you see that part of me.
You refused to be a victim to my stubbornness and called me out on my feelings. You knew the look I gave you and knew exactly when I caved in.
Love isn’t perfect, so i would never say we are living a fairytale. But our connection is so strong, that our love will always prevail.
So here I am now, laying next to the man of my dreams. Thinking how perfect my life is with you on my team.
I could never explain in detail what you mean to me, for the love I have for you is as deep as an endless sea.
So here I am now, giving you all that you set free. My soul, my heart, my love and forever ME!
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1010101111111111 100011100111 01010101111111 100111100101111011 10111111110111111011110101111 1011111001110101 1110101011111 1110111011111 1011011011111101 1110111101111101 111111101 1111111101111110101111111 1011101011100011111101101111010101110 1101111101111001011001011111011101 111111011011111010111111111 11100100111111101111111111101 111111011111111111100101 |
Characters | 1,444 |
Words | 319 |
Sentences | 24 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 64 |
Words per line (avg) | 17 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 90 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
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Written on January 29, 2023
Submitted by Jewlesbabe16 on January 30, 2023
Modified on April 10, 2023
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