Analysis of Refuse to Sink



Refuse to sink, I’ll say it well, all that time for time does tell.

Like an anchor on a boat. Don’t drop it down. Remain afloat.

Stay strong! Never let them see you cry. It’s just for him- you know the reason why.

My daddy dear, I love you so. You taught me well, but please don’t go!

Shattered! Hearts are broken, but there’s still hope. Refuse to sink and stay afloat.

I love you daddy, I have all along. Through thick and thin, We’re “Padgett-Strong!”

So you refuse to sink and we will stay afloat. Because there’s still time and there’s still hope.


Scheme X A X X A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 011111111111111 111010111110101 1110111111111110101 1101111111111111 101110111101110101 111101110111010101 110111011101011110111
Characters 581
Words 116
Sentences 17
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 59
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This poem is a dedication to my father whom is fighting cancer as we speak! Just today we was just given not so kind news. So we refuse to sink!

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Submitted by justanns2006 on January 26, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Justin Ann Meager

Growing up in small town America. Raising my kids while helping take care of my sick father! I love art in all forms (painting, drawing, and the art of non traditional poems. more…

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