Analysis of The Bright Smile



I hear your voice and this smile comes.
My lips curl up,
  these dimples begin to hurt.
My heart flares and races on.
Fingers twined and tight.
Our shadows dance in the light,
 on the wall and the bed.
Your touch explodes inside my skin.
My breath is taken.
You helped me let go.
I laid down the extra luggage and spred my wings.
You embraced me, let me grow.
You saw me and made me glow.
I feel your touch and this smile grows.


Scheme ABCDEEFGHIJIIK
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 1111 1100111 1110101 10101 1011001 101001 11010111 11110 11111 111010100111 1011111 1110111 11110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 431
Words 98
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 326
Words per stanza (avg) 85
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Written on January 27, 2023

Submitted by jessie_h on January 27, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Jessie L Hill

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