Analysis of Vengeance is Mine



Vengeance is mine sayeth the Lord
A statement I'm sure we've all heard at one time
Also a very tough one to deal with
Vengeance is not ours according to the Bible
It's left to faith
It's left to the belief that the horrific crimes of others will be dealt with
I, myself have a hard time with it
I have no choice but to follow it
Even if I don't agree with it
I would like to believe that evil will be dealt with
Or is currently being dealt with on some spiritual level
I would feel better If I knew the outcome of the vengeance
If I could see the result
See the "check" being paid as it were
I am having trouble not seeing murderers get what is coming to them
I can live without killing them
I can deal with them being locked up for life
But I want something more than that...........................
Say..........
Hard labor?
Daily torture?
Public caning?
Castration?
All of the above?
Prison is no longer a viable deterrent for the horrific crimes that occur
Every year we as a species seem to find new and more grisly ways to murder each other
What will this year bring?
What will be this year’s most shocking death?
And who will bring it?
The kids?
They seem to be the latest thing in absolute shocking carnage
Or maybe this will be the year of the female
They have been lacking in the body count of 2009
Maybe this will be their year
I wonder
Do you even really care?
Thou shalt not kill
It seems that statement has fallen upon deaf ears for quite a long time
You know.............
If we as a people didn't have religion
Evil wouldn't stand a chance
The sense of right and wrong
Would destroy the evil of man without a thought
If you knew you could destroy an evil person and not pay religious consequences would you?
Of course you would
As most of us would
There is no remorse for doing good deeds
And taking vengeance upon evil
Is noble and just
But the rules of religion say we must not
The rules say we must rise above it
And trust it will be dealt with
Keeping the faith it will be done
To try and hold this commitment
Is in itself God like
Which is why most of us fail
And fail miserably
We want vengeance
We want their death
We want them to feel our pain
Our suffering
Our loss
Our sorrow
Our anger
Our hatred
Vengeance is mine sayeth the Lord
And it is because of this statement
That we have faith

Eric (and sometimes not)


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,339
Words 467
Sentences 15
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 68, 1
Lines Amount 69
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 906
Words per stanza (avg) 226
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Submitted by EASN on February 11, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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