Analysis of The Jolly Roger
Paul Marauder 1962 (Belfast)
On board the Jolly Roger
the fickle crew
listen to their fickle captain
as he speaks
with his fickle tongue.
Spitting blame and phlegm
on everyone
and everything
His capricious manner
destroys any harmony
amongst the crew.
For the Jolly to exist
it must navigate
in troubled waters.
And for the crew to survive
they must drown
everyday in the misery
and acrimony of
their egomaniacal captain.
I'm on board another ship
now called the Enterprise.
We sail on calmer waters.
Guided by knowledge, empathy
and brotherhood
and a love for the sea.
Now and again I see the Jolly Roger
but I no longer
recognise the crew.
The sound of raucous laughter
is still there
but has now diminished.
I see the captain.
He walks with a limp now.
He wears a patch over his
left eye.
His faithful malevolent pet
is by his side
still snapping at heels.
A young man walks the plank.
The fickle crew point,
laugh and push him
to the edge.
I wake in a cold sweat
and smile.......
Scheme | ABCXX XCXADB XXEXXDXC XXEDXD AABAXX CXXXFXX XXXX FX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101010 0101 10111010 111 11101 10101 110 010 101010 0110100 0101 1010101 1110 01010 0101101 111 10100100 01001 1110 1110101 11010 1111010 10110100 010 001101 10011101010 11110 101 0111010 111 111010 11010 111011 1101101 11 11001001 1111 11011 011101 01011 1011 101 110011 01 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 993 |
Words | 220 |
Sentences | 16 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 6, 8, 6, 6, 7, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 94 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
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This poem is about bullying in the work place. It’s set on board a ship but it could be anywhere.
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