Analysis of untitled#16

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



There is nowhere or no one to turn to I burnt all those bridges along my way to finding my peace that is now on the verge of being disturbed. I thought I found love again in someone else's eyes but I looked in the mirror and realized that it is only mine that I need for the selfishness I refuse to any longer to bleed.

Do not say that I am the one who is sending all of these weird vibes. you say that you are in love but honestly, I think it is only the thought and not the feeling being you say everyone can be replaced that might be and you may forget my name but you will remember my face.

No longer do I beg for anyone or anything to stay so if you want to leave I am not the one to stop you for I would rather lose you than lose myself being it took me this long to find my way


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Characters 786
Words 172
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 204
Words per line (avg) 56
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Written on February 21, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on February 21, 2023

Modified on April 16, 2023

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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