Analysis of to my hubby



your fear of loosing the love of your life
is a false fear
the false evidence appearing real is only in your head
you are playing devilish tricks upon yourself
i love you more than i care to admit
but for you i bare my soul, i am 300 percent in love with you
i desire you and only you
mind blowing cerebral fact i do not want to be away from you at all. i am you through and through
you are fighting yourself for what you want silly it is what we both want
you would know this if you just had a conversation instead of making all the decisions for yourself if we are a team act like it include me you are trying to make up for the past i get it you were an ego maniac and are a work in progress i am tired of being without you. you want me to be happy, that will only happen through open communication and me feeling the love warmth comfort and stability in your arms. and yes my apology kiss i asked for a million years ago. patiently waiting. and yes i am pissssssed with you. but so i still love you and miss you terribly.get it


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
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Characters 1,031
Words 212
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 81
Words per line (avg) 21
Letters per stanza (avg) 812
Words per stanza (avg) 211

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man up and go kiss and apologize to your wife, you made her cry

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Written on February 27, 2023

Submitted on February 27, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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