Analysis of Trying To Improve.



I want to improve myself,
But I am not improving,

Somewhere something
Goes wrong,
This is breaking my way
To become strong,

How to help myself
With all these,
When my life would become
At an ease,

After all this,
I have one thing
In my mind,
Something is always
Left behind,

To live a long with
A healthy life,

For all this,
I have to improve myself,

My half past life was
Just simple,
Even then
I kept trying,

Every day, every month,
Every year,
But the problems are coming
Nearer to near,
Trying to improve,
One day or the other............


Scheme AB BCXC ADXD EBFXF XX EA XXXB XGBGXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111011 1111010 110 11 111011 1011 1111 111 111101 111 1011 1111 011 1011 101 11011 0101 111 111011 11111 110 101 1110 10011001 1001 1010110 1011 10101 111010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 550
Words 127
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 5, 2, 2, 4, 6
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

This is a thought that how the things happen in our life, particularly in my life.

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Written on March 07, 2023

Submitted by brijmohanpoply01 on March 07, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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