Analysis of My Son Madison

Candi Carroll 1984 (Tallahassee)



Sitting here watching you lifeless
Breathing with no response,
Seeing you look like that
It makes my heart drop.
My heart is shattered as
My eyes fill with tears,
I want to see those eyes open
My heart is filled with fear.
I cannot lose you baby
We need you here with us,
We have a trip to take
Just like we discussed.
Momma will not leave you
Until you can open your eyes,
I love you so much and so
Glad you're a child of mine.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIAJKLMNO
Poetic Form
Metre 10110110 101101 101111 11111 111101 11111 11111110 111111 1101110 111111 110111 11101 101111 01111011 1111101 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 432
Words 96
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 333
Words per stanza (avg) 87

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Heartbreaking reality

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Written on February 27, 2023

Submitted by candi.carroll4 on February 27, 2023

Modified on April 21, 2023

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Candi Carroll

I am a mother of four and caregiver for my mom. I love writing about my feelings. more…

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