Analysis of Stardust Greenhouse

Jay Fowles 1979 (United States)



Darkness cradles the warm heavens
Envy falls upon jealous eyes
Illuminate my pupils magic scope
Blinded by kingdoms lies
Thin fabrics spun and stitch by gods
Eclipses drape moons cratered face
Shadow's pirouette on ocean's tide
Pulling seasons into place
Shattered mirror  pieces paint a Galaxy edge beaming bright
Towers castles and coliseums sparkle in the starlight Chariots fire playfully race they're golden feathers brush deaths door
Piercing through orgasmic ozones thrust inside her silky shores.


Scheme ABCBDEFEGHI
Poetic Form
Metre 10100110 10101101 0100110101 101101 11010111 01011101 1011101 1010011 101010101001101 1010011000110010100111010111 101111010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 514
Words 86
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 424
Words per stanza (avg) 77

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A full moon painted a story in my mind

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Written on March 04, 2021

Submitted by fowlesjay33 on February 23, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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