Analysis of The Murderer and the Harlot (Prison of Ice)



I am a scoundrel,
you are a wretch.
You’ve followed me here,
to this dark filthy trench.

I am a liar,
you are a slave.
We both languor on,
with one foot in the grave.

I am a killer,
you are a whore.
But what makes my sin,
more hideous than yours?

‘Cause we’re both horrid scum society rejects;
we’re the loathsome chapters most readers neglect.

I am a murderer, and you are a harlot;
let’s salvage our lives… or what’s left of it.

So you found me here in this prison of ice;
will I survive or meet my demise?
And will you be my guardian angel,
or just another fallen devil?

I am a killer, and you are a whore.
But look, we have an open door!
We can ascend toward salvation,
or plunge and fall to our damnation.

So let’s escape from this prison of ice;
we’ll change our course and avoid our demise.
We can’t erase our old transgressions,
but there’s a chance to grasp redemption.

I am a killer, and you are a whore;
let's both be sinners who sin no more.
While in the flesh we’re locked in prison,
at least our spirits will be ransomed.

I am a scoundrel, and you are a wretch;
let’s both ascend from this dark filthy trench.
While we have time let's salvage our lives,
and save our souls from this prison of ice.


Scheme abxb cdxd cexx xf xx ghaa Eeii ghxi Eeif bbxg
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 1101 11011 111101 11010 1101 1111 111001 11010 1101 11111 110011 101101010001 00101011001 110100011010 11010110111 11111011011 110111101 0111110010 110101010 1101001101 11111101 110101010 1101110010 1101111011 111010011001 1101101010 110111010 1101001101 111101111 100101010 111010111 1101001101 1101111101 1111110101 01101111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,254
Words 280
Sentences 19
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2, 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

Based on Rodion Raskolnikov and Sonya, from Fyodor Dostoevsky's renowned novel, Crime and Punishment.

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Written on February 18, 2023

Submitted by JD.Mags on February 18, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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J.D. Mags

I spent seven years as a photojournalist. I spend much of my time writing poems, listening to music and thinking about life. I have traveled to numerous countries around the world and realized that people everywhere are the same. more…

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