Analysis of The village road friend



To this way I did not intend
Instead I took road with the bend
I don't know why I had to pretend
Just Because …
I was trying to make a friend ??

Take it easy, take it slow I said
As nothin's goin across my head
On the big fat highway as I sped
I realized …
I should have the village road instead

Life can be as long as you want it to be
Some can live a hundred years
Yet others can live only a sixty
To love myself is my foremost duty
Then why not slow this life in the city ??

While I found the city life a wonder
And I couldn't resist …
Its excitement n thunder,
I found the rustics nice and caring
Then Why not have the happy way ?
Why should my life be so daring ??

To this way I did not intend
Instead I took road with the bend
Now I don't want to pretend
Because I know …
How to make a good friend !!


Scheme AAaxa bbbxb cxccc dxdexe AAaxa
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 01111101 111111101 101 11101101 111011111 1110111 10111111 110 111010101 11111111111 1110101 1101110010 11111110 1111110010 1110101010 011001 1010110 11011010 11110101 11111110 11111101 01111101 1111101 0111 111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 822
Words 185
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 6, 5
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

After the COVID pandemic everyone's begun to seek a happier and more comfortable living, no pushing, no daring, no excitement, just flow naturally. This poem describes how a city goer settles for a happier village friend.

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Written on January 14, 2022

Submitted by nilima.choudhury on February 27, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Nilima Choudhury

She is an electrical engineer from North Carolina, USA. She is a high school physics and math teacher. She enjoys music,art,yoga, traveling more…

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