Analysis of The Fading Light



Flashing light  Blinding light
Grandpa on a stretcher
Pale gasping for breath

Grandpa hold on for
Hot dogs heaped with onion
Fishing from a log
The stories I have yet to know

"Slow down" he'd say "You're growing too fast"
Granda. slow down don't leave me now
In the fading light


Scheme AXX XXXX XXA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 101101 11010 11011 1111 111110 10101 01011111 111111011 10111111 00101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 281
Words 54
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Written after the death of my grandfather

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Written on 1990

Submitted by russell_1 on March 19, 2023

Modified on March 19, 2023

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