Analysis of Over the Moon and Under the Stars



It’s a Saturday night special in Nowheresville
The fireflies light the way
Mad Dog and a field road
Is all I have to say
To paint you a picture of misspent youth
And a simpler time and place
We kissed like the night would never end
Trapped in time and space

“What’s Your Name” blasted out the stereo
As we cruised those country roads
Endless miles of corn and beans
No particular place to go
Too old to sit around the house
To young to hang at bars
You held my hand and gave me a ride
Over the moon and under the stars.

Looking back it’s plain to see
“I Ain’t the One” should have been our song
First love can often come with a curse
We didn’t do anything wrong
“Call me the Breeze” we both sang out
Though our love ended way too soon
Never forget the time we had
Under the stars and over the moon


Scheme XAXAXBXB CXXCXDXD XEXEXFXF
Poetic Form
Metre 1010011001 010101 110011 111111 1110101011 00100101 111011101 10101 011101010 1111101 1011101 10100111 11110101 111111 111101101 100101001 1011111 1101111101 111101101 111101 11011111 110110111 10010111 100101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 823
Words 165
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 209
Words per stanza (avg) 53

About this poem

A remembrance of young love with a tip of the cap to Lynyrd Skynyrd after the passing of Gary Rossington

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Written on March 05, 2023

Submitted by ileini86 on March 23, 2023

Modified on April 11, 2023

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