Analysis of Jesuits Venturing



The storm had challenged
The ship’s planking, canvas, cross arms.
Helps or rope restraints
Had been employed
Almost too late.
Francis had nearly
Lost his chest of letters, Loyola’s work.
Sepia pictures of sister Annette
Their mastiff Prince
And five special friends
Training, exchanging
At the Abbey.
They often gave their
Best in the Silence.
Or passing the bread
And cheeses.

This China Bay was the
Strangest colour of pale blue.
The working ship
Coolies all consigned
To deathly black.
His robe was a purple.
Scarf was white with
Blood red edges.
Cap three-cornered.
Friend Aloysius was constantly
Into his dictionary for Mandarin.

Seemed as if ship’s parrots (3)
Had richer, more usable vocabulary.
“Eight o’clock Boys
Have you washed, prayed, dressed.
AWWKKK.”

Captain would show ship’s charts.
Both monks tried their best
To catch on, study routes.
Assess depths and trenches.
There was also that navigating
Hand tool. Astrolabe.
Made reference to stars.
Just as Wise Men knew courses
In Luke chapter two.

Would the Christ arrive in these parts
Gentle down the yellow skins.
Fast footed, short stepped souls.
Nix their superstitions
By the sheer force of Love.
Communion, Last Rights?
Rosary rounds.
Patient listening,
Noble burden bearing?
Lord willing.
Always Lord willing.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01110 01101011 11101 1101 111 10110 11111011 1001011001 1101 01101 10010 1010 11011 10010 11001 010 110110 101111 0101 1101 1101 111010 1111 1110 1110 10101100 0111001100 111110 11011000100 111 11111 1 101111 11111 111101 011010 11101100 111 110011 1111110 01101 10101011 1010101 110111 11010 101111 01011 1001 10100 101010 110 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,306
Words 244
Sentences 30
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 16, 11, 5, 9, 11
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 205
Words per stanza (avg) 41

About this poem

Ignatius Loyola missed the grandeur of Rome, but from parts in Spain, he did wonders of wisdom, fairness and administration.

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Written on March 26, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 26, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 26, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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