Analysis of Why do you pick

Jordane Garrity 1994 (Alaska)



You know what I dont get?
Why you sit there and pick?
You know it makes you look mentally sick

You snap back and act like a crazy prick
Maybe if you learn how to quit
you'll be a little less of a dick
But I know that's not something your willing to admit
I know its your nervous tick
But don't you want to quit?
Self control only takes a little bit
Just gotta give yourself a little kick


Scheme XAA ABABABBA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111101 1111111001 1110110101 10111111 110101101 1111110110101 1111101 111111 1011010101 1101010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 392
Words 87
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 8
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 40

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Watching someone deal with the bad habit of picking

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Written on February 09, 2021

Submitted by Jordaneg5614 on March 27, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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