Analysis of Longing for Home



Surrounded by sand
Shot at by the enemy
I want to go home…


Scheme ABC
Poetic Form Haiku 
Tercet 
Metre 01011 1110100 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 60
Words 13
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

I first wrote this poem while deployed to Iraq in the winter of 2005. It was my second deployment as a Marine Corps radio technician, and at this point, I had spent nearly 11 months on the receiving end of weekly rocket and mortar attacks. In the throes of an existential crisis, I wanted nothing more than to be in the comfort of my home.

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Written on December 01, 2005

Submitted by allenk.acom on March 27, 2023

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