Analysis of The Tears of the Sky



How long has the heart of the sky been broken?
Pent up sadness that has never been
spoken

Thundering.
Anger.
Hailing punishments
Pouring sadness
I wonder who is to blame?
When all these forecasts are clearly
signs of pain.

The rain is the tears that the sky is pouring
While we're unbothered in our beds snoring.
We find comfort in the sadness of the sky, but the reason for its sadness we deny.

It's obvious you'll cry when your loved one is drying.
So why do we rejoice when the world is crying?


Scheme AXA BXXXXXX BBX BB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 11101101110 111011101 10 100 10 10100 1010 1101111 11101110 111 01101101110 111010110 1110001010110101110101 1100111111110 111101101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 504
Words 105
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 7, 3, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

this poem was born by the sudden interest in the rain falling from the sky on a Thursday morning on the way school. This poem represents the hidden feelings that the world is trying to express, but we as humans are too naive to realize them.

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Written on March 16, 2023

Submitted by rochedraghoender2 on March 16, 2023

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Jannadine Draghoender

I am 17 years old, from South Africa I go to Cambridge High School I enjoy playing cricket, sketching and of course writing poems more…

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