Analysis of I SAW YOU

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



Last night was the first night I slept in many days, and there I saw you in my dreams even though the newer version of you lays beside me and keeps me awake during these once-numbered days. But last night, when I needed your comfort, I swear I saw you.

You spoke to me and said the one true love of mine, I have been dead for years; please move on, swallow your foolish pride, and wipe away those whiskey tears. I know that you will never forget my name, and just like you saw me, I saw you, and believe my word, she will love you better or just the same.

Darling, you will always stay with me, and what you found, at last, pleases me behind the eyes, the heart, and the mind can see. I saw you, and you said to embrace the dreams that you wished upon our star to come true.


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Metre 1110111101010111101110101010111011011011011101111111011011111 1111010111111111111111011010101110111111100111011111111001111111101101 10111111011111101010101001111110111010111101101111
Characters 776
Words 160
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 198
Words per line (avg) 52
Letters per stanza (avg) 198
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Written on April 10, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on April 10, 2023

Modified by Oakley on April 14, 2023

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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