Analysis of THE DYING TREE

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I am sitting outside watching the trees surrounding me start to grow their leaves, but one who stands there looks like a human without any clothes; why is this dying tree naked? I hear it asks itself.

All the other trees are starting to get their leaves, but here I stand, this dying tree. Why won't they put me out of my God damn misery and cut me the hell down? There is no one around, so I will not make a sound.

Wait, I said as I started to see rainfall instead of tears.
I have been sitting outside watching the leaves start to grow for many years, and you have always been my favorite. The moment that those words reached the tree branches was the second I saw my first leaf of green.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111011100101011111111111110100110111110110111101 1010111011111111110111111111111000110111111011111101 11111101110111 1111011100111111010111111000101111011010101111111
Characters 692
Words 140
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 135
Words per line (avg) 34
Letters per stanza (avg) 180
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Written on April 15, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on April 15, 2023

Modified by Oakley on April 15, 2023

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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