Analysis of Misplaced direction
What brings me to this paper?
What brings me to this pen?
No, it’s not dragons and lions or nor beautiful things,
It’s all the memories and things that torture men in their dreams.
Think about love and beautiful colors,
All mixing so well together.
Think about wishes and completed goals,
And of course, think of all the things that make you complete.
Now think about all the things that bring you happiness and joy,
All the smiles and all the laughs.
Everything that once brought you joy in life,
And every man knows what turned that to pain and agony to where we didn’t care to live.
It was once a beautiful face,
A happy place that turned our hearts to ice and made are blood run cold.
It was a woman some time more than one.
It was all the broken promises and all the fake “I Love You’s”
No magic words no magic in the world could make us whole,
So, we become unbearable so hard to love.
We were once on cloud nine and full of life,
To just get it sucked out of us so quick and cannot recover.
So yes, many men did become heartless,
Where we were once full of life and lots of love to give.
Now we just believe all women want is to hurt and abuse us,
So yes, there are many of us that will turn spiteful and turn out right evil to a woman.
For the fear that all they want to do is hurt us,
They must think men have no feelings and only want sex.
But that for many is not the case, but for some yes!
We want love and affection, but you must prove you are worthy of that to get that.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111110 111111 11110010111001 110100011101011 1011010010 11011010 1011000101 0111110111101 110110111110001 1010101 101111101 0100111111101001111111 11101001 01011110111011111 1101011111 1110101000101111 11011100011111 110101001111 1011110111 1111111111010010 1110110110 1101111011111 1110111011110011 11111011111100111101010 101111111111 1111111001011 1111011011111 11100101111111011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,526 |
Words | 333 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 5 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 41 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 164 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 43 |
About this poem
Just the answer to so many woman's question on love
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Written on April 11, 2023
Submitted by johnc.18136 on April 17, 2023
Modified on April 18, 2023
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