Analysis of Loneliness of the Heart

Tommy L. Maddox 1972 (North Carolina)



A couple walks in love's embrace,
content and silent with total grace.
I watch from the shadows,
a soul not loved.
For it is my folly,
my personal prison.

My heart lies in darkness,
cold, empty, and without vision.
One day though she will come,
to unlock my shackles with the key,
I lost so long ago.

For now, this is where I shall reside,
in the shadows watching.
waiting for the one,
who will be my savior.
Bringing kindness and love,
to my dismal entrapment.

Here I remain for now,
hopeless and lost.
Tormenting myself,
in the loneliness of the heart.


Scheme AAXXBC XCXBX XXCXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01010101 100101101 11101 0111 111110 110010 111010 11000110 111111 101110101 111101 111111101 00110 10101 111110 101001 1110010 110111 1001 101 00100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 558
Words 125
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 6, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

One of my first poems

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Written on April 22, 2023

Submitted by tmaddox3 on April 22, 2023

Modified on April 22, 2023

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Tommy L. Maddox

Tommy L. Maddox has traveled the world and seen many wonderful and horrible things. Cursed by demons and been blessed by angels. During a time when he was at a loss for what life was to be about his heart opened up and poetry flowed forth. From there came songs and the need to fill himself with more knowledge of the world. A path that has lead to history, theology, religion, philosophy and the discovery that his ancestors were famous musicians from King George of France and the Queen Elizabeth the 1st to the first musician to hold the title of Master of the Kings Music. (Nicholas "The Younger" Lanier.) All the way forward in time to "A Street Car Named Desire." There are many other aspects from which he came from and has created his own path which continues to develop as he moves forward. more…

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