Analysis of II



If one day I find you in the meadows of my heart
    And ask from whence you found your way and when you shall depart –
Please answer not you find the roses too sweet to resist
    Nor that the sunset on the seas would be too sorely missed.
Speak not of evening strolls beneath the moonlit trees of spring
    Nor of the song of crickets on the winds the summer brings
Linger not in autumn leaves, their scent left with you still
    And leave no whispered vow upon your breath in winter’s chill

Indeed, my love…

Bathe yourself in blood and hate, resent what I have done
    Bleed my sins upon the beaches ‘neath that setting sun
Rend my flesh and blind my eyes that I may witness not
    The years of empty promises lain strewn about to rot
Burn the roses, braid the thorns, lashed tight around my skin
    And lay waste to the meadow that I found you strolling in
When “another life” is merely ashes on the wind
    Take your leave that I may never hear “almost” again


Scheme AABBXXCC X DDEEFFXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111001111 01111111011101 11011101011101 1101101111101 1111010101111 11011101010101 1010101111111 01110101110101 0111 1010101011111 1110101011101 1110111111101 01110100110111 1010101110111 0111011111100 1010111010101 111111101101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 988
Words 185
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 1, 8
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 248
Words per stanza (avg) 61
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Written on May 06, 2023

Submitted by jrobert on May 07, 2023

Modified by jrobert on May 07, 2023

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