Analysis of Inner Child



It's unclear when it happened,
the passing of youth.
But suddenly I knew,
and it held onto me like a truth.

My realization struck,
cutting through like a diamond blade.
I found my younger self,
hidden deep like an ocean's shade.

Adolescent Joe,
forever my inner child.
A shadow that speaks in silence,
waiting patiently, yet wild.

But today he found his freedom,
I saw it in Ryleigh and Stella.
Optimism blooming like flowers,
each morning kissed with dew


Scheme XABA XCXC XDXD XXXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1011110 01011 110011 011101101 110101 10110101 111101 10111101 0101 0101101 0111010 1010011 10111110 11101010 10010110 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 458
Words 97
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Written on May 15, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on May 15, 2023

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Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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