Analysis of The World's Great Pain



In this world we live in,
Man thinks he's the king of it all.
That he can rule and reign
And not suffer, 
Though his house will crumble.

He lives in his lavish home,
A picture of wealth and splendor.
But every time he goes out
He adds to the world's
Hate and malaise.

He takes, and takes, and takes
Until there's nothing left.
And what is his reward?
A lifeless world
Of death.

For every tree he cuts down
One must grow in its place.
But he doesn't heed the warning.
And so, the home
He claimed as his own
Is now a mess of the world's decay.

The skies once blue and clear
Are now shrouded in smog.
The rivers once free and flowing
Are now stagnant 
With his filth.

He thinks, "As long as I'm okay
What's the harm in a little pollution?".
But every time
He throws something away
He adds to the world's destruction.

For every person who cuts a tree
Another one must grow in its place.
But he doesn't heed the warning.
And so,
The home he claimed as his own
Is now a mess of forgotten courtesy.

The forests once alive with birds
Are now silent without sound.
The animals once free and wild
Have all but vanished 
from the forest.

He thinks, "As long as I'm okay
What's the harm in a little change?".
But every time
He goes on his way
He adds to the world's great pain.

For every person who continues to drive
Another tree must be cut down.
But he doesn' heed the warning.
And so, the home he claimed as his own
Is now a wasteland without soul.

He destroys the home he claims as his own,
All in the name of his wanton wishes.
And in the end he gains nothing
But misery and a world on fire.

It's time we realize 
Our home is not our own.
We're merely caretakers
Of this sacred place.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 011110 11101111 111101 0110 111110 1101101 01011010 11001111 11101 1001 110101 011101 011101 0101 11 11001111 111011 11101010 0101 11111 110110101 011101 111001 01011010 1110 111 1111111 1010010010 11001 111001 11101010 1100101101 010111011 11101010 01 0111111 11011010100 01010111 1110011 01001101 11110 1010 1111111 10100101 11001 11111 1110111 110010101011 01011111 1111010 010111111 1101011 1010111111 1001111010 00011110 1100001110 11110 10111101 11010 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,782
Words 299
Sentences 30
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 6, 5, 5, 6, 5, 5, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 60
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on May 16, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on May 16, 2023

Modified by JoeStrickland on July 12, 2023

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I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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