Analysis of Calm/Storm



How often have I repaired my heart
Just to see it torn apart

How often have I hidden myself
Just to be exposed to the light

How often have I told her I love her
Just to hear no response

How often have I stared into the grey
Just to contemplate my purpose

How often have inched toward the edge
Just to wonder what lays beyond the ledge

I swear I can’t feel a thing anymore
But I somehow feel everything around me

How can I have so much empathy for everyone else
But care so little about myself

Tell me how does that make sense
How does that make sense

I am a detriment and an asset at the same time
The wreckage and the lighthouse
The calm and the storm
How does that make sense


Scheme aa bx xx xx cc xx xb dD xxxD
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 110110111 1111101 11011101 11101101 1101110110 111101 1101110101 1110110 110110101 1110110101 111110101 111110011 1111111001101 11110011 1111111 11111 1101000111011 010001 01001 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 687
Words 145
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Written on May 24, 2023

Submitted by joshlucas on May 24, 2023

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