Analysis of Grandfather

James Lynch 1924 (Iowa) – 2022 (Illinois)



dame writing i have wooed in vain
you promised riches, gave but pain
i plied thy ear with lilting phrase
gave thee all youth's golden days

love missiles, hundreds; you disdained
to publish one that bore my name
your cold rejections of my lips
are bound in ribbons, stacks of slips

may the muse bear witness of
these pounding temples to our love
the slivered grey in my hirsute
you may have caused, though that is moot

oh shattered dream, oh frittered hour
oh heart that lingers in some bower
hoping still, alas, slack
would'st have this poor but honest hack...


Scheme AABB XXCC DDEE FFGG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11011101 11010111 1111111 1111101 11010101 11011111 11010111 11010111 1011101 110101101 0110101 11111111 110111010 111100110 101011 111111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 563
Words 104
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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Written by my grandfather in 1948

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Written on 1948

Submitted by poetry5240 on May 24, 2023

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