Analysis of "You my friend light my way"



"You my friends light my way "

Alone in the dark of the night take me out the dark I'm in these awful  thoughts when I wake up.

The light I need it's free and full of glee.

Friends we all are in different ways help is help builds us up in trying times, look this is not a nursery rhyme it's a poem from my heart.

I'll start with we are all friends god says so let's respect and open new doors and explore I tell myself.
I step and step outside my door I'm a little scared that I will get hurt life has made me so burnt.

I turn the sappy into happy thoughts .

Goals are here to stay what else is there to say?

Life is life I'm sprouting seeds within my poetry and quotes are going into others homes is all I care the words run true because I don't feel blue,happy me is helping somebody...

I make it to therapy I make it to group I make it because I want to win, win,win this is me...

You my friend light my way I hope you stay...

-Lenamarie Clark ©️
06/07/23


Scheme A X B X XX X A B B A XX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 01001101111011011011111 0111110111 11110100111111101011111010011010111 111111111110101011001111 110111111010111111111111 110101101 11111111111 1111101011100011100110111110111011111111010 1111100111111110111111111 1111111111 11 1
Characters 972
Words 219
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 56
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

I wrote this because, Friends from God help heal, they light my way to be a better day..

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Written on June 07, 2023

Submitted by PoetFeather on June 07, 2023

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Lenamarie Clark

My name Is Lenamarie Clark, From Arizona. I been writing poetry since age 11,I have well over 150 poems, i write just about daily. Poetry is my story, keeps me going in life! I dont know where I would be if poetry didn't exist. I believe that some where someone needs someone's inspiration... -Lenamarie Clark- more…

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