Analysis of Amiss

Steve Cochrane 1955 (Cape)



My ship came in, where had I been?
It seems I was confused.
My plan fell short at the airport
And left my ego bruised.

I then did try to climb real high
In search of my success.
The ladder made for me did fade
With termites in excess.

I also dreamed of get-rich-schemes.
A sure thing, I was told.
But it did not avoid the fraught
Of rainbows and their gold.

So now I find a piece of mind
In working every day.
I like the work, which I don't shirk
And home for holidays.


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11101111 111101 1111101 011101 11111111 011101 01011111 11001 11011111 011111 11110101 11011 11110111 0101001 11011111 01110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 472
Words 108
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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Wrong place, Wrong time!

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Written on June 18, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on June 18, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on June 18, 2023

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