Analysis of Pain and Pleasure
ida ayu tania 2002 (mataram)
all the pretty stars shine for you, darling.
all those times you say that I’m like the fire, I burn
I keep you warm and inspired.
you make me feel like your whole world
but I’m just blessed with rage
'cause I got a huge hole in my soul at this young age.
you are the brightest shade of sun I have ever seen.
like the dawn, you woke the world inside of me
and I am just a bouquet of roses in the trash.
darling,
doesn’t have a problem
just like an absolute angel.
we are like water and fire,
you’re cooling down,
I’m burning up.
when I fell in love, the kingdom of Hades changed,
the sun rose from the west,
and sorry for being obsessed with love,
as if it’s my fault.
your Bonnie on your side
you’re happy, I am sad
and you know that I am bad, bad.
your voice,
your laughs,
darling, you’re just a stroke of luck.
these feelings and thoughts in my mind,
got me feeling like being strangled,
blinded,
hard to breathe,
with those ropes in your bedding sheets at night.
I’m restless, harsh, despairing
although I do have love inside me, I just don’t know how to use it
and there is so much pain, I don’t know how not to notice it.
I suffer in my loving
does it turn you on, darling?
I was the craziest when my heart touched.
I want you to see a mess
and still find me worthy of love.
kiss me where you bruise me
touch me gently where you scar me
make my legs shake, not my heart ache
darling,
before I let you go, just one more time
take off your clothes, and pretend that everything's fine
in case I come back to you, could you keep just one blank page
…and a bottle of red wine?
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Metre | 1010111110 1111111101011 11110010 11111111 111111 1110110111111 1101011111101 10111010111 0111001110001 10 11010 1111010 11110010 1101 1101 111010101101 011101 0101100111 11111 110111 110111 01111111 11 11 10110111 11001011 111011010 10 111 1110110111 1101010 1111101111111111 011111111111101 1100110 1111110 1101001111 1111101 01111011 111111 11101111 11111111 10 0111111111 11110011101 01111111111111 0010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,612 |
Words | 354 |
Sentences | 16 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 3, 6, 4, 6, 5, 5, 3, 3, 3, 2 |
Lines Amount | 46 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 109 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
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Submitted by garnetgullveig on June 21, 2023
Modified by garnetgullveig on June 21, 2023
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