Analysis of FOUGHT TO BECOME KING

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I had lived many lives before I came back to live this one. My soul kept taking on other life forms, telling me, soldier, you are not yet done. Plenty of battles will be fought, and more lessons will be learned and taught.

The smoke kept clearing over the years, and I was the soldier known to have no quit or fear, so they kept calling me back, not knowing that I was planning my attack to win this war that the kingdom knew nothing about.

The sun is starting to stick its head out of the clouds sending me a message through its rays saying your ancestors are proud because you are who everyone has been begging to call you may still wear your scars, but you are no longer a soldier. You have fought their battle to become their king


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111010111111111111011011101101111110110111011011101 01110100101101011111111111011110111101011111101011001 01110111111011010101111011011011111011101111111111111001011111010111
Characters 736
Words 146
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 193
Words per line (avg) 47
Letters per stanza (avg) 193
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Written on June 28, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on June 28, 2023

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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