Analysis of Intense Longing

Joe Strickland 1986 (Hobbysville, SC)



In the morning
When the coffee
Is hot
And the dreams
Are still fresh
In my mind
When the bathroom mirror
Reveals the truths,
My longing
For you
Is a fire.
When the busy streets
Start to clog
With folks in a rush
When the bird songs
Are mingling
With the passing cars
I'm caught
In my love for you.
When the realization
Of your absence
Hits hard
Like a punch
When the emptiness
In my chest
Feels like
It will forever stay
My heart
Still beats for you.


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Poetic Form
Metre 0010 1010 11 001 111 011 10110 0101 110 11 1010 10101 111 11001 1011 1100 10101 11 01111 101010 1110 11 101 10100 011 11 110101 11 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 469
Words 111
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 357
Words per stanza (avg) 89
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Written on June 28, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on June 28, 2023

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Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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