Analysis of Fractured Wings



The regret assumes its stance,
Hunched,
A shadow cast
By the sun's disdain,
It laughs and twirls,
A wicked dance,
Encased in solitude,
Like a burning flame.
I, with fractured wings,
Fall from grace,
Whispering forgotten melodies,
Once so sweet,
Now tangled
In a never-ending chase,
Desiring solace,
A respite from defeat.


Scheme ABCDEAFGHIJKLIMK
Poetic Form
Metre 0010111 1 011 10101 1101 0101 01010 10101 11101 111 100010100 111 110 0010101 010010 010101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 329
Words 67
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 253
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Written on June 28, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on June 28, 2023

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Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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