Analysis of Echoes Of Freedom



In the power of words,
A great experiment
Conceived in a time
When the sun dimmed.
The tyranny of monarchy
Grips tightly
Like the weight
Of a thousand chains.

We hold these truths
To be more true
Than others can imagine.

"Endowed by our Creator
With certain unalienable rights."

Life,
Liberty,
The pursuit of happiness.
Some of us are pushed
Closer than others.

To secure these rights
Governments are instituted
On the spine of a nation.

Deriving its powers
From the consent
Of the governed,
But what of the legacy of slavery?

All men are created equal
Untouched by the inkwell of cruelty
Yet deeply rooted
In the soil of hypocrisy.

We declare these facts
To be self-evident
Hoping that eventually,
One day
We may rise above
The whispered promises.

That among these rights,
Some will be bestowed
Only to a chosen few,
Those of privilege
While others are shackled
By their skin.

The highest aspirations
Of a fledgling nation
Yet,
Perhaps,
A discourse
Of contradiction.

We pledge our lives,
Our fortunes,
Our sacred honor
To the eternal struggle,
To transcend
The vast terrain
Of injustice.

Though the words may fall,
Like shadowed whispers
The power
Of the Declaration
Echoes still.

As a nation,
We have traversed
A formidable path,
Studded with shadows
And thorns,
Our destiny molded
By the agonizing strains
Of progress.

Yet,
Amidst this relentless
March forward,
We remain trapped
In the desolate pit
Of our own depravity,
Lurking in the depths
Where our shortcomings
Writhe.

Though we have ventured far,
The road ahead stretches
Palpably long,
Peppered with countless
Stumbling blocks
That threaten to ensnare us
In an unyielding grip.


Scheme xaxxbbxc xde fg xbhxi gje ixxb kbjb xabxxl gxdxxx meNxxe xmfkxxo xifex exxxxjcx Noxxxbxxx xlxhxhx
Poetic Form
Metre 001011 010100 01001 1011 01001100 110 101 10101 1111 1111 1101010 01110010 1100100001 1 100 0011100 11111 10110 10111 1001100 1011010 010110 1001 1010 11101001100 11101010 01101110 11010 00110100 10111 111100 10101000 11 11101 010100 10111 11101 1010101 1110 110110 111 010010 101010 1 01 010 1010 11101 1010 101010 1001010 101 0101 1010 10111 11010 010 10010 101 1010 1110 010001 1011 01 1010010 1010001 11 1 011010 110 1011 001001 11010100 10001 11010 1 111101 010110 1001 10110 1001 1101011 010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,701
Words 353
Sentences 17
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 8, 3, 2, 5, 3, 4, 4, 6, 6, 6, 7, 5, 8, 9, 7
Lines Amount 83
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

I wrote this on independence day 2023. It explores how powerful declaring freedom from a monarchy that felt like slavery. But, however the rights of a new nation were given to all men and held from others due to their skin color. I tried to convey how far we've progressed as a nation but we still have a ways to go

Font size:
 

Written on July 04, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on July 04, 2023

Modified by JoeStrickland on July 05, 2023

1:46 min read
18

Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

All Joe Strickland poems | Joe Strickland Books

15 fans

Discuss this Joe Strickland poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Echoes Of Freedom" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 20 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/163256/echoes-of-freedom>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    11
    days
    13
    hours
    55
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    How many syllables an Iambic Pentameter line must have?
    A 20
    B 12
    C 10
    D 3