Analysis of FAMILY AND FRIENDS

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



People from my past keep calling me as if they just befriended me today, saying the words that they think I want to hear, telling me it feels like I lost my brother and that I am losing a family member. All I can say is we are not from the same tree.

These same people who say they miss me like the abused miss their abusers knew all my weaknesses, used them against me, and then wondered why I am so guarded and unreachable. The loss was a lesson that was not so quickly teachable, but it opened my eyes to many lies.

I now know who walks by my side, and when times get hard, like a horny virgin teenager, a boy's erection goes and hides. Sometimes life is supposed to fuck you without lube, not those you call family and friends.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10111110111110101011001111111110111111110011110010010111111111011 111011111100111010111100110110110111110001000110101111101001110111101 11111111011111010101001010101011101111011111110001
Characters 734
Words 149
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 191
Words per line (avg) 48
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Written on July 07, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on July 07, 2023

Modified by Oakley on July 07, 2023

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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