Analysis of Desperate



splayed fingers and raised arms are powered pylons, wet with energy,
and signals to you are sent
my meaning wavers in the air,
ripples of light spread shredded into fragments.

but your eyes are constellations, each pore of the landscape of your irises is a star,
and a decipherer.
we piece together what is shredded between us.

the stagnant sky is sweet to breathe
and our speech wades through it in peace.
the warmth of our interplanetary communication is supple and silken,
faint vapours from clicking tongues
from out of there, our breath is desperate to mingle
warm and crashing against each other,
violent nude human, and hot in panting.

we’ve latched as undetected viruses within each other
a pulleying parasite, a dumbbell telephone wholly mute and grey
our lungs of disparate colours are slingshotting ourselves into one another
for interpersonal interactions’ ferocious breeding.
wordless breathing becomes apocrypha,
so even in mirrored foetal positions
fully clothed in shift dresses of twilit sleep, we speak ciphered volumes.


Scheme XXAX XAX XXXXXBC BXBCXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110011110111100 0101111 1101001 10111100110 11110101110111100101 001 110101110011 01011111 010111101 0111001000010110010 111101 1111101110110 101001110 10011001010 11101010001110 0110011010101 1011100111001011010 1010001001010 1010011 1100101010 101011011111110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,049
Words 182
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 7, 7
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 213
Words per stanza (avg) 42

About this poem

Communication between people, and following how it travels between them and is altered as information is sent, and the need for understanding between individuals to allow for less flawed communication.

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Written on February 19, 2023

Submitted by jodindc on June 17, 2023

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Julian Odin de Clercq

I’m a South African 21 year old man. I love writing, it brings me unfounded joy to witness literature in any measure. I read and am inspired by nonfiction and horror novels mostly, whose protagonists with social abnormalities or physical defects are my favourite. The world is full of beauty, and for posterity’s sake we must hold beauty to a high regard. To share art is to impart a personal treasure, and let abundance and pleasure propagate. more…

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