Analysis of End In Life



A half-bloomed rose
on a bent stem,
water between
the cobblestones.

Grey clouds moved on
and a big sky
sends down glimmer,
transitory.

My face wrinkled,
steady, watching.
Gently, the rose
taps the stones.


Scheme AXXB XXXX XXAB
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 1011 1001 010 1111 0011 1110 100 1110 1010 1001 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 206
Words 42
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

A focus on imagery. Minimalistic, four syllables, last line three.

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Submitted by brmcc9 on June 08, 2023

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