Analysis of My Life

Nicolas Simpson 1983 (Illinois)



He was alone at his home,
She left him with a broken heart,
She took his car with chrome,
He doesn't know where to start,
They fought all the time,
And now he's sitting in prison for his crime,
She took everything that he had to live for,
And left him threw the front door,
He cries in pain,
Now he will go insane,
He calls his mom and dad,
He told them that she took all he had,
He starts to write and write,
He knows what's right,
God knows him well,
That's why he's not going to hell,
He prays to him every day,
He has a lot to say,
Passing his time away is killing him,
Its like driving his car on one rim,
He's not going anywhere,
So he finds some friends and shares,
He shares but no respond,
So he goes and gets help.....


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101111 11110101 111111 1101111 11101 01110010111 1110111111 0111011 1101 111101 111101 111111111 111101 1111 1111 11111011 11111001 110111 1011011101 111011111 111010 1111101 111101 111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 729
Words 172
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 546
Words per stanza (avg) 149

About this poem

Its about what I went through my past life.

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Written on July 16, 2023

Submitted by nicolassimpson21 on July 16, 2023

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Nicolas Simpson

I grew up in a poor enviroment with no money. And been struggling for years to get my poetry going and read by a lot of people. I didn't know how to to go get my poetry read. So i became to a Poetry reading and i really enjoyed it. It inspired me to become a poet. And plus I have an aunt the writes poetry too. more…

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