Analysis of You me and our love!



You me and our love!

There she was,
In the calmness of the morning,
Yes there she was,
Spreading her presence in ways mesmerising and charming,
As her beauty hung everywhere now,
Here, there, to be everywhere,
I felt a world of beauty it was now,
Where I belonged only with you somewhere,
Now she was in the daylight as well,
The light, the day and she,
Beauty that was covering everything so well,
That I felt the entire universe was nothing, but her deep eyes and she,
And in this interplay of lights and your beauty, I wondered where I was,
Then I discovered that with you I too was everywhere my love,
For now Irma, everything that there was,
It was you, me and our love!


Scheme A BCBCDEDEFGFGBABA
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 111 00101010 1111 10010011010 10101101 111110 1101110111 110110111 11100111 010101 10111001011 111001010110101101 00110110110110111 110101111111011 111010111 11110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 676
Words 145
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 16
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 262
Words per stanza (avg) 64

About this poem

This poem leads the reader into the universe of feelings where love exists in everything. Explore the poem and be a part of the universe called "LOVE!"

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Written on July 17, 2023

Submitted by javidaiw99 on July 17, 2023

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Javid Ahmad Tak

I have been writing poems for several years now. And my passion for poetry goes back to my school days, when I encountered Wordsworth's famous poem Daffodils, and I instantly fell in love with it, and the poet in me woke up. Since then I have been experiencing a wakeful poetic bliss! more…

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